[Acc 2] : The
Controversy of Plastic Surgery
In this day, plastic surgery
has been an extremely controversial subject. People who do plastic surgery have
increase. Especially, people in South Korea, almost of them do plastic
surgery. Generally people who do plastic surgery is artist or entertainer, but
not always them.. students have do plastic surgery too for many reason. Plastic
Surgery is surgery that can change part of body. Commonly part of body that are in plastic surgery is nose, eyes, ears, mouth which any in body’s face. So, Many pro and
contra about do plastic surgery in people.
Many people
claim that using plastic surgery is bad to do, because plastic surgery has many
bad effects for part of body humans. If
using plastic surgery is fail, so part of body that are in plastic surgery will broken. And other
reason if people do plastic surgery so people must take much money to do
plastic surgery. And plastic surgery is
bad impact for the body that use it.
In others
side, people approve of plastic surgery with many reason. First reason of
plastic surgery is plastic surgery can change part of body’s people who use it
to be perfect. Second reason is plastic surgery can increase they selfconfidence for
socialize with others. Third reason of plastic surgery is can increase they
popularity and self esteem in entertainment. For artists, they do plastic
surgery for their job in entertainment and want to get satisfactions for them.
As a result
of this controvery, plastic surgery has many advantages and disadvantages. Many
people do plastic surgery because they don't have selfconfidence in their own
body, they claim that their body is bad and difference with others so they do
plastic surgery. I think do plastic surgery is bad because plastic surgery
can damaged people’s body who used it, and they should be grateful to God that gave the good’s body and keep their bodies not make their bodies broken. Plastic surgery has many bad
impact for people, so we should not do plastic surgery.
21 Oktober 2012 pukul 07.38
that's good conclusion,, I think so jo :D
cause plastic surgery can harm our health ^_^
Thank you ;)
21 Oktober 2012 pukul 07.46
Great ! Your aticle is so complete (long)..
you're right Jon, "and they should be grateful to God that gave the good’s body and keep their bodies not make their bodies broken..."
21 Oktober 2012 pukul 07.48
Barly, Aliyah Ningrum : thanks for your comment, i will comment your article back. :D
23 Oktober 2012 pukul 10.10
the article is very nice!for us who haven't know about it, but now we know it. the side effects of plastic surgery ... thats good, keep it up.
2 November 2012 pukul 07.13
hmm your writing is good jons, you have added some pictures also, those will help the reader to imagine your writing clearly, your rule, your genre also clear enough, thank you